Christmas for Albert was different this year. Dear Katherine had unexpectedly passed away in April. Albert had quickly drifted into depression, and took to the 'drink'. His robust laughter as the children sat on his lap masked an enormously deep sadness.
As he exited the side door of Macy's, he retrieved the flask from his pocket, and took a long draw from the narrow opening. The warmth of the whiskey would keep him warm on his long walk home to the lonely apartment above the store on Amsterdam.
He decided to take a different route home, walking north along busy 5th Ave. As he crossed 53rd he could hear the rich sound of the St. Thomas Church organ accompanied by hundreds of voices inside..."Away in a manger..." A small voice told him to "go inside". So, Albert, the once happy, now sad, white bearded fat man rolled through those church doors...perhaps the right doors at the right time.
This is my Christmas Day installment of the prompted, creative writing exercise, Saturday Centus. The prompt is the bold italicized part.
Peace and blessings, with hopes for better days ahead.
Namaste, jeff c...
This sounds like it could be the start of something BIG, Jeff! Thanks for your sweet message on my post. You are truly my friend!
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That was beautiful.
ReplyDeleteThis was excellent Jeff. Truly in the spirit of Christmas!~Ames
ReplyDeleteI hope he finds his peace. Very, very good!
ReplyDeleteTruly wonderful, Jeff. You did such a good job of blending the sadness of loss with the joy that is Christmas. As you know, I have struggled with that. As usual, it is seamlessly written, and it touched my heart.
ReplyDeleteYou're the best! I wish you great peace and love in your heart. But wait, you already have that...............cj
PS: As to my piece, I guess the devil make me do it!
Encore, Jeff. I really want to know what happens next. Merry Christmas to you
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This was just wonderful. You really showed not always on the holidays are people happy. Sometimes there is real suffering and sorrow. Good job on your Centus.
ReplyDeletevery beautiful though a tad sad...will there be an another instalment?....merry Christmas though its over now....happy weekend...
ReplyDeleteLovely though sad. Hope you had a good time!
ReplyDeleteNicely done, Jeff. A really inspiring story for the holidays.
ReplyDeleteYou make me want to read more, Jeff! Keep it up!
ReplyDeletePeace & Blessings!
Anna
Anna's SC#34
Jeff, this is a beautiful story. I think you should try your hand at novel length works...or maybe you already are. Glimmer Train would be a wonderful place to enter your longer short stories as well.
ReplyDeleteYour writing seems like it is getting more poignant to me of late. Perhaps reflecting the season filled with memories and hopes.
Wishing you an amazing 2011 filled with discovery, joy and memory making moments.
Thank you for sharing your talents.