Saturday, January 1, 2011
Quiet Resolve
The snow gone from the ground, springtime sounds and scents blanketed her world. Her crumpled up list of resolutions lay dusty in that corner. The wrinkles of the paper secreting wishes and hopes made hastily, like pudding. The wrinkles of the paper, like the wrinkles of her face, revealing a wisdom acquired over time...understanding that winter is not a good time for change.
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I really like this Jeff....Winter is not a good time for change! Yet here we all are thinking of the changes for the new year. I am wishing you much peace and happiness my friend.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful and thoughtful piece...
ReplyDeleteI love the last line...Winter is indeed not a good time for change. That line is wistful, it's resigned, it's trudging through reality.
ReplyDeleteI agree with there Jeff! But sometimes life changes come at you with a pitch fork!
ReplyDeletePeace & Blessings
Anna
Anna's SC#35
Interesting and thoughtful take. However, I think anytime is a good time for change, especially if is really needed. Well written piece!
ReplyDeleteI like the last line, too. It just works.
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Oh I love how this reads. You are a master of words my dear!
ReplyDeleteJeff, what a true and thoughtful post. I am so impressed. You certainly are a multifaceted man.
ReplyDeletei loved your use of words their jeff especially the wrinkles 'secreting wishes' bit. good stuff :)
ReplyDeleteHappy new year!
Dear Jeff,
ReplyDeleteYour text is even better now that I have read it a second time! Love the imagery of the wrinkles in her face as well as the wrinkled paper. Now, I understand that 'winter' is also a metaphor for 'the winter of one's life'.
Lovely piece.
I have written another version of my centus. You can read both if you have the time!
Best wishes,
Anna
Anna's SC#35 + second text
This was beautifully written, Jeff. Thought provoking and wistful. Loved your take on the prompt. Kat
ReplyDeleteThis was just so thought provoking, having just come back from seeing mom at the nursing home. Good job.
ReplyDeleteThat is so right - winter not good for change. I'll leave it till tomorrow!!Good one!
ReplyDeleteLove it!
ReplyDeleteThis happens to me every year. Come spring, resolutions are long forgotten. Winter isn't a good time for change - spring is the season of change.
Does this mean I have permission to wait til spring to work on my resolutions?
Winter is depressing sometimes. Definitely not a good time for change! I like it!~Ames
ReplyDeleteHow talented you are, my friend. I love the analogy of the wrinkled paper and the wrinkled skin - perfect. I agree, also, that the darkest part of the year may not be the best place to find new light. I did get new full-time job, though! Yea!
ReplyDeleteNamaste..........cj
Fabulous & love the imagery!
ReplyDeleteThis is beautifully written!
ReplyDelete"The wrinkles of the paper secreting wishes and hopes made hastily, like pudding." - Wonderful.
I really enjoyed your centus and it is true "winter is not a good time for change".
Very well done, Jeff!
ReplyDeleteJeff.
ReplyDeleteJeff.
OK, almost wordless here.
This was an absolute gem of a little story. I felt this through my entire heart.
These words...all of them...touching and perfect.
Thank you.