This post is done in response to the weekly, prompted writing meme, Saturday Centus. The writing prompt is in bold italics. This week's prompt is in honor of Tom's birthday. Tom is a regular contributor to this meme. Happy Birthday Tom!!
Saturday, September 25, 2010
A Different Kind of Birthday
Frank was told by the receptionist to go to the room, 3rd door down on the right. As he walked down the long hallway he heard talking and laughter coming from the room. He entered through a golden door and found a large, bright and sunny room. A large number of people were seated at a long, cloth covered dining table, richly adorned with the most beautiful flowers. Among the guests, and much to his surprise, were his mom and dad, grandparents, great aunts and uncles, and a host of people he did not recognize. "Frank's here", they cheered. "Good to see you Frank. Sit here at the end", his dad said. At the end of the table, next to his dad, was a very large white cake with numbers of brightly colored, lit candles. As he sat down, the guests started singing, "Happy Birthday To You..." He never dreamed when he blew out the candles on his cake that there would be birthdays in heaven.
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That is incredible! I never imagined heaven celebrating birthdays either . I always assumed we would remain a certain age forever . How wonderful !
ReplyDeleteWhat a nice twist at the end. It's interesting to see what different writers do with the same prompt/phrase.
ReplyDeleteJeff. I loved the elegant and evocative prose you used here to transport us to a heavenly concept.
ReplyDeleteThis is something I've never thought of...but I love the idea that it might exist.
Thank you for linking.
This was really a compelling use of the prompt.
I liked this idea alot, and I love the concept of birthday parties in heaven - how fun to be able to celebrate with your entire family once again. But the line that made me smile the most was "Frank was told by the receptionist..." The thought of receptionists in heaven just gives me the giggles, I have no idea why :)
ReplyDeleteI love the twist. This is a very nice, clever, and joyful piece!
ReplyDeletexoRobyn
Oh wow! What a great take on the prompt! I wonder if there are....?
ReplyDeleteWow, what an unexpected surprise. Wouldn't it just be wonderful... Good job.
ReplyDeleteWhat a clever concept and original take on the prompt! Definitely one of your most intriguing literary journeys yet, Jeff! I loved the great imagery too!
ReplyDeleteAnd thank you for the birthday wishes!
What a sweet story, Jeff!
ReplyDeleteI like this idea and great writing!
ReplyDeleteReally neat direction to take this prompt in. I hope the cake is heavenly! : )
ReplyDeleteThis was a wonderful vignette that allowed us to contemplate the wonders heaven might hold. I ponder that sometimes and look forward to lovely scenes of once again meeting loved ones who have passed on. The ending to your story was priceless.
ReplyDeleteWhat an uplifting site you have!
I bet it was the best birthday ever, peace.
ReplyDeleteJeff, Your words are so visual, your images so concrete. I don't know why I am amazed every time I read one of your pieces, but I am You continue to speak to my heart.
ReplyDeleteThanks..........cj