This tiny piece of creative writing is my contribution towards the weekly, prompted (in italics), creative writing exercise called Saturday Centus. I encourage you to go there and check out some wonderful responses to the prompt. Thanks to our teacher, Jenny Matlock...
Peace and Blessings
...and BTW,I missed the deadline for Alphabe-Thursday, but I posted something anyhoo titled "Orange You"...check it out...if you dare
...and BTW,I missed the deadline for Alphabe-Thursday, but I posted something anyhoo titled "Orange You"...check it out...if you dare
Hum, I wonder about that too...
ReplyDeleteVery thought provoking and deep ;-) Loved it.
ReplyDeleteNow something else to ruminate upon...I always enjoy my stops here.
ReplyDeletecurious take on SC, it's poetic in a way
ReplyDeleteGreat job. I actually thought about trying poetry on SC (at least, I thought about it yesterday)...when I saw the prompt, inspiration for poetry did not come.
ReplyDeleteGlad it did for you!
This is deep... I love to read what everyone does with theirs. Like 5thsister said I too enjoy my stops here.
ReplyDeletePoetic and thought-provoking.
ReplyDeleteThanks!
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Well, what about those objects on the other side? Don't think I want to think about that today. This is my mind's day off! :)
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed!
Malisa
Wow ... thanks for blowing my mind with this one!! I've gotta sit down now!
ReplyDeleteObjects on the mirror's other side? Ha, there are non, I've looked. it's all black paint or something..Mwahahaha
ReplyDeleteGreat writing Jeff :)
You always make your posts so creative! I think you've changed the words slightly & i got lines when I did that & Miss found out!!
ReplyDeleteVery clever use of the prompt. Beautifully written. My favorite line "wanton, wounded wings" - just perfect. Kat
ReplyDeleteAnother wonderful post! I love your writing dear Jeff!
ReplyDeleteLove it Jeff, very good!
ReplyDeleteReally great imagery in this. The prose itself even feels like it's almost blurring together.
ReplyDeleteAs for the other side of the mirror, like Vicki, I've looked too. As a kid I would stand in front of the mirror and then try to sprint out to see if I could trick my "reflection" that I believed to be a copy cat.
Beautiful imagery. I'm with Kat. That one fragment is delicious.
ReplyDeletewhat about them?? seriously - thinking now.
ReplyDeletethat sounds very deep. and a very good question!
ReplyDeleteDeep. Profound.
ReplyDeleteMade my head hurt trying to think this through.
All in all a perfect use of the prompt.
Jeff, you are really something.
Thank you.